The present

We have been learning how to write a recount. I did well at adding detail. Next time I could add some sound effects. We watched a video and we had to write a recount about it.

The present

One super sunny afternoon a tall 12 year old boy was playing video game and staring at the game and then his mum ran in the door slam!!! The boy was still playing his video games the his mum put a box right in front of him. He moved his head to the side growling at his mum then his mum stumbled up the stairs the boy was still playing the most awesome game  but hath looking at the box then he put his control and opened the box. When he was slowly opening the box a dog jumped out. But when the boy looked at the dog one of his legs has fell of. The boy just chucked the dog on the ground. The dog barked roaf roaf!!! The dog was upside down rolling around and saw a red bouncy ball on  the floor under a draw and the dog ran to it but he kept falling over. Meanwhile the boy grabbed his control then started playing video games again. Soon the dog came tumbling back. The dog did the most cutest puppy eyes ever for the boy to though the ball. The boy dropped his video games and wobbled on his feet butt he lost a leg as well. so he grabbed his and walk to the door and he said mom i will be outside. The boy opened the door and the puppy jumped around. Then the boy though the ball and the do to catch it. The boy laughed and the boy followed the dog happy.