persuasive letter

In Te Maunga we have been learning how to write a persuasive letter. I did well at the ides and the planning. Next time I do this I will maybe give better reasons. Here is my letter

Paihia school
School road
Paihia

1st of August

Miss Lindsay

Paihia school
School road
Paihia


Dear Miss Lindsay

Can you please give the school 600 dollars for maths hub. I think we should get the maths hub website because, it won't only help us but the whole school, don’t you want to help the school. it will help our learning, it’s easy to use and it saves time for the the teacher...

Firstly it will help our learning really well. For example if we didn’t have it we won’t learn as well. It will help us find things to do for our goals. It is great for the whole school to use as well.

Secondly it is really easy to use and it will be really fun. For example it’s clear and is the same as our I Can’s. It is not to confusing for us. It has activities to learn our goals, practice our goals and to prove our goal that we can do to the teacher.

Lastly it saves time for the teacher. It helps the teachers find activities for our goals a lot easier. You don’t have to sit on the mat and wait for the teacher to tell you what to do and waste lots of learning time, you don’t want that, do you.

Please can you buy maths hub for our learning, school and Me.

Your’s truly

Franky Sefton